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MyhometownisBeijingthecapitalofChina.Itisinthenorthofthecountry.It'sthethirdlargestcityinthecountry.Itisamoderncitybutitisalsoacityofalonghistory.Therearemanybeautifulplacestovisit,suchasthePalaceMuseum,theSummerPalace,theTempleofHeaven,theGreatWall,thebirdnet,thewatercubeandsoon.Itismuchconvenientandcomfortabletotakeatrain,abusandasubwaytogoaroundBeijing.Therearemanymodernandtallbuildings,shoppingmalls,hotelshereinBeijing.Ithinkmyhometownisbeautifulandclean.Ilikeitverymuch.
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Myhometownisabeautifulplace.Itstandsbesideawideriverandisrichinfishandrice.
Butintheolddaysitwasapoorandbackwardlittletown.Manypeoplehadnowork.Theylivedahardlife.
In1949myhometownwasliberated.Sincethengreatchangeshavetakenplacethere.Thestreetshavebeenwidened.Factories,schools,hospitals,cinemasandtheatreshavesprunguponeafteranother.Thelifeofthepeopleisgreatlyimproved.
Ilovemyhometown.AllthemoreIloveitspeople.Theyareworkinghardsoastomakeitstillricherandmorebeautiful.
你就更具自己的条件改一下就可以了